Response to Joey Tennyson’s “Persuasive Speech Evaluation”

I agree with Joey Tennyson in many of the aspects regarding his speech. First off, I agree with him pertaining his introduction. I vividly remember his introduction because it caught my eye with a very good hook. Using an actual example was very good. Another positive that I also agree with is his posture and eye contact. Unlike many others in the class, Joey had very good eye contact throughout the whole speech and his posture was very good. A negative side to Joey’s speech, which I agree with, was his volume. At times, I could not understand what Joey was saying. Talking a little louder and more clearly would have helped this. Another positive attribute to Joey’s speech was his eye contact. He was rarely looking at his note card and he was very confident in his delivery. You could tell that he knew a lot about the topic. Lastly, Joey had a lot of good information. There was a lot of good information provided, which really persuaded the audiences view on the topic. Also, the information seemed like it was very precise and it was presented well with other facts. Overall, Joey’s persuasive speech was very well organized. He showed great confidence in his speech. Although there were a couple negatives toward his speech, he made up for them with the positives. I was very persuaded when I listened to his speech.